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c/creative-writing-promptsrobinson.hannahrobinson.hannah1mo agoProlific Poster

Pro tip: I wrote a story from my cat's point of view and it got weird fast

For a challenge last month, I decided to write a 500 word flash fiction piece from my cat's perspective. I thought it would be funny, but it turned into a surprisingly dark story about the hidden world under our couch. I learned that forcing a specific point of view can unlock themes you never planned. Now I'm stuck because the idea feels too strange to expand into a full story. Has anyone else had a simple prompt take a sharp turn into something unexpected?
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susan130
susan1301mo ago
Wait, the hidden world under your couch is dark? My cat just finds old hair ties and dust bunnies down there. Maybe you should check for a secret portal or something.
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graydavis
graydavis1mo ago
Honestly, you need a good flashlight to really check under there. My kids' toys end up in the void all the time. If you see anything shiny or feel a draft, that's a bad sign. Might want to poke around with a broom handle before reaching in. Found a whole snack bowl once, which explained the ants.
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the_alice
the_alice29d ago
What kind of flashlight do you use that's strong enough? Susan130 might be onto something with the portal idea if you're finding whole snack bowls. I just find crumbs and a weird, sticky spot I don't want to know about.
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